Looking for feedback

[impurenergy]

So I took the advice from people on this forum about video making and I am very happy with my results. I am looking for some criticism and feedback in order to improve my skills. The video was shot on the P3P and I was advised to use Premiere Pro to edit and boy am I happy with that softwares capabilities. Feedback negative and positive welcome and encouraged. What would you change?

 

[charlieb4]

I like ur style, and great choice for the music. I just feel, that the last clip, the side view, was not in style with most of ur clips in video. Keep up the good work! Btw, where was this taking?

 

[impurenergy]

Thank you very much for the feedback I will edit that part out when I am doing my full reshoot!