Very nice work Doug. Great job at persevering and actually getting a permit and written permission from the resort. That might be a first. I hope antnyp85 is correct as I will be bringing my P4 without a permit for the second time next week. An excellent job of getting set up shots, cutaways, and other staged shots that often get overlooked. Great job of mixing up the camera style. Hand help, timelapse, drone, and so on. As a professional editor, I will be happy to provide some constructive criticism as it seems that is what you are looking for.
Length: With the exception of very close family (which very well might be who the video is for) it is way too long for most viewers to digest. 2-3 minutes is a good length.
Nat sound: Natural sound is the important other half of what makes video's compelling. With a few exceptions, the majority of the video has no sound at all other than music. I like the old quote off the top but the rest of the opening sequence has no nat sound. A few now boarding, fasten your safety belts, Bong, engine roar, etc would help make people feel like they are there. You clearly put a lot of time and energy into putting this together don't skimp on the audio.
Drone shots: Level to the horizon. Not sure about the P3 but you probably can adjust the gimbal horizon levelness in app. If not punch in on the video and level it in edit. Spinning shots while the drone stays stationary should be avoided. Try to avoid getting your propellers in the shot, and a personal preference I don't like seeing the drone operator in the video.
That's all I got.
Good job.