I am no expert, but I will try to help. Just my view and the aesthetics as I see them. You were doing so, but one place in particular as you were coming down in front of the church, I thought you should have moved the gimbal with the flow of your movement. You seem to stop and then move the gimbal. As you came from the back of the church and passed, I felt it would have been better to have stopped there. You then turned which I would have left out. I then would have went to panning down the steeple. Coming up from the river was a little long, with little interests. Maybe a little quicker shot or just the trees to the church. Leave people wanting more. Don't be be redundant or too long. Oh yea. you need to clean the cobwebs out of the belfry. Lol. I'm nobody and everything I said could be wrong. KEEP SHOOTING. AH, VIDEO THAT IS.