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Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by SpoonDronetography, Aug 6, 2015.

  1. SpoonDronetography

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    Do you guys just mind checking over my website and giving me any feedback that you can? It's the first serious website I have made so any pointers will be awesome. If you do watch any videos, feedback there as well would be awesome.

    Spoon Dronetography

    Thanks guys!
     
  2. snerd

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    I can't help it, I updated your first paragraph a little bit. A comma here, a word change there.


    I began flying airplanes and helicopters very young, and I had a strong interest in video and photography as well. As I grew older, I have been able to combine two hobbies and create what you see now . . . Spoon Dronetography. Check out the website for more info and contact me for any questions or business inquiries.
     
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  3. SpoonDronetography

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    Thats fine, I was typing at about 2am so I am sure I missed stuff haha. Thanks!
     
  4. SteveMann

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    "I began flying airplanes and helicopters very young"

    Don't repeat yourself. This doesn't need to be on two pages.
     
  5. SpoonDronetography

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    Thanks, I went and edited that paragraph some.