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Do you guys just mind checking over my website and giving me any feedback that you can? It's the first serious website I have made so any pointers will be awesome. If you do watch any videos, feedback there as well would be awesome.

Spoon Dronetography

Thanks guys!
 
I can't help it, I updated your first paragraph a little bit. A comma here, a word change there.


I began flying airplanes and helicopters very young, and I had a strong interest in video and photography as well. As I grew older, I have been able to combine two hobbies and create what you see now . . . Spoon Dronetography. Check out the website for more info and contact me for any questions or business inquiries.
 
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"I began flying airplanes and helicopters very young"

Don't repeat yourself. This doesn't need to be on two pages.
 
"I began flying airplanes and helicopters very young"

Don't repeat yourself. This doesn't need to be on two pages.

Thanks, I went and edited that paragraph some.
 

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